Paul Formisano Blair Assignment
Activity #1:
I will ask my male students to work with Blair’s Lecture XXVII on “Eloquence of
Popular Assemblies,” pages 342-360. The speech they will work with is President
Polk’s May 11, 1846 address to the United States’ Congress calling for the
declaration of war with Mexico.
In his lecture Blair suggests that the “object” of eloquence one finds in
popular assemblies “is, or ought always to be, persuasion” (344). He continues:
“There must be some end proposed; some point, most commonly of public utility
or good, in favour of which we seek to determine the hearers” (344). With this
clear objective in mind for deliberative speech, Blair then provides a number
of criteria a novice orator must employ to bring about the desired ends. He
first warns against mimicry of the classicist orators like Demosthenes whose
words are “fraught . . . with argument” (344). On page 344 through 347 he
provides a number of other elements an orator must consider. Some of the most
important include:
•Become “masters of the business on which they are to speak”
•“Be well provided with matter and argument” which will receive the greatest
attention
•“Always give to their discourse an air of manliness and strength”
•Employ “ornament”
•“Be ourselves persuaded of whatever we recommend to others”
My assignment will ask the students to examine Polk’s speech in light of each
of these criteria and decide whether his ends—convincing Congress that war is
justified with Mexico—are achieved. In their consideration of Polk’s logos,
they should also come to a conclusion as to whether Polk’s ethos represents the
necessary “manliness and strength” for persuasive public discourse. This is
where they can rely on their previous coursework in classical rhetoric
(Aristotle and Quintillian in particular) to determine whether the president
fits these qualities, and also whether he is a noble orator whose reasons are
for the betterment of American society.
Activity #2:
These same students have just completed their analysis of Polk’s speech. It
just so happens that these students have also read Thoreau’s “Resistance to
Civil Government” ("Civil Disobedience") and a number of students
feel that the Mexican War was an unjustified and imperialist attack on Mexico. Thus, this second assignment requires students to craft a speech for an audience of
their own choosing, allowing them to make arguments regarding the war. As in
the last task, they are to draw from Blair to shape their speeches.
It is important for them to remember that Blair argues that an orator operating
within public discourse be convinced of the ideas that are being shared with
others. Therefore, students will divide up based on their convictions regarding
the Mexican-American War. Added to what they learned through the analysis,
another important idea addresses arrangement. Blair states, “Nothing is of
greater consequence than a proper and clear method” (347). This is important
for two reasons, one being that it allows the memory to recall the main ideas
to be presented. Memory’s role in the process of invention as coupled with
method is paramount in the eloquence of popular assemblies. Blair urges orators
not to have memorized their speeches word for word but be able to “be suited to
the course which the debate takes” (346). Therefore, the speaker must have thoughts
organized so that memory can recall them, especially in the event that the
debate goes a different direction that expected. If “every thing [is] found in
its proper order,” the orator can adapt to varying situations and still get his
points across in a clear, organized manner. The second reason is that proper
method helps the audience follow along, ensuring that the listeners “feel the
full effect of every argument” (347). Able to follow the orator’s train of
thought, they can focus on the argument itself rather than trying to follow a
confusing train of thought.
Blair doesn’t stop his suggestions with arrangement. He includes five points
concerning style and expression. These conditions come from pages 348-350.
1. The emotion should be appropriate to the situation
2. We should never falsify our emotions
3. The orator must always keep emotions in check, never to be carried away by
them even if the subject suggests otherwise
4. Always be aware of the conventions and tastes of the audience so as to not
exceed their limits in these areas
5. Always understand one’s audience or as Blair says, be aware of “decorums of
time, place, and character”
With these principles in mind, the assignment will allow students to not only
argue the position they support, but will challenge them to understand the
audience’s needs so as to not offend nor come off as something that they are
not.